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« on: March 07, 2005, 04:39:37 AM »
Just got wind of a new Coldplay track making the rounds called "Talk."  Not bad, but it doesn't sound like a "hit single."  It's a bit reminiscent of U2 (in the guitars) and Roxy's "Out of the Blue," only not as exciting.
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« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2005, 08:50:53 AM »
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« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2005, 10:09:44 AM »
Thanks for asking -- I can walk and function again, but it's still sore to ease into and out of chairs.  It helps that I'm on more meds than Judy Garland right now.
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« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2005, 10:21:50 AM »
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It helps that I'm on more meds than Judy Garland right now.


most people are.

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« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2005, 11:36:00 AM »
Mark Morford on the Coldplay phenomenon....

http://sfgate.com/columnists/morford/
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« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2005, 12:02:56 PM »
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« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2005, 01:39:52 PM »
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Mark Morford on the Coldplay phenomenon....

http://sfgate.com/columnists/morford/


I generally agree with Morford's sentiments (as I do in this case too), but can I just say that his stream-of-consciousness writing style makes me want to scream. Does anyone edit his stuff? It's rare that I ever read an entire column of his, simply because I can't bring myself to slog through his interminable run-on sentences to glean the three or four pertinent points that he might have. Some of what he says is funny, but it would be moreso if he'd rein himself in and not just spew.

Is this what the blog has brought us to?

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« Reply #7 on: June 17, 2005, 01:57:55 PM »
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Mark Morford on the Coldplay phenomenon....

http://sfgate.com/columnists/morford/


I generally agree with Morford's sentiments (as I do in this case too), but can I just say that his stream-of-consciousness writing style makes me want to scream. Does anyone edit his stuff? It's rare that I ever read an entire column of his, simply because I can't bring myself to slog through his interminable run-on sentences to glean the three or four pertinent points that he might have. Some of what he says is funny, but it would be moreso if he'd rein himself in and not just spew.

Is this what the blog has brought us to?

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Agreed.  I think a lot of what he says is overshadowed by how he says it.  Even worse, I think he skews his own views so that they will fit into his rap.  I can't take him seriously.
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« Reply #8 on: June 17, 2005, 02:00:36 PM »
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How totally hip!
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« Reply #9 on: June 17, 2005, 02:13:04 PM »
I've said for awhile now that Morfred's writing style is "precious".

It's nice to know other folks think so, too! Too bad, too- because as you guys say- we generally agree with him.
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« Reply #10 on: June 17, 2005, 03:07:52 PM »
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I've said for awhile now that Morfred's writing style is "precious".

It's nice to know other folks think so, too! Too bad, too- because as you guys say- we generally agree with him.


when Morford goes too far he is way beyond precious.

try nauseatingly self important.

and of course I DO agree with 99.8% of what he writes.

But I totally want to take a railroad spike and chisel the following words in reverse across his forehead so he sees them every time he looks in the mirror:

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« Reply #11 on: June 17, 2005, 03:14:03 PM »
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Does anyone edit his stuff?


Hey kids! Let's play the edit-Mark-Morford game!

original run-on sentence:
Yes, I know, singer Chris Martin is all hunky and sweet and very much like that adorable artsy guy who sat in the corner of Café Claude all day and wrote dreamy poetry about sunshine and willow trees and how many tears fit into a coffee cup. This makes him impossibly adorable to millions of women.

new & improved actual paragraph:
Singer Chris Martin is hunky and sweet.  He's very much like that adorable artsy guy who sat in the corner of Café Claude all day.  You know, the one who wrote dreamy poetry about sunshine and willow trees.  And how many tears fit into a coffee cup. This makes him impossibly adorable to millions of women.
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« Reply #12 on: June 17, 2005, 03:31:07 PM »
Morford is a uniquely SF creation: a straight guy who most readers assume is gay because of the cutesy way he writes. He couldn't get away with that syle anywhere else but on sfgate.
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« Reply #13 on: June 17, 2005, 07:41:06 PM »
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Does anyone edit his stuff?
Hey kids! Let's play the edit-Mark-Morford game!

original run-on sentence:
Yes, I know, singer Chris Martin is all hunky and sweet and very much like that adorable artsy guy who sat in the corner of Café Claude all day and wrote dreamy poetry about sunshine and willow trees and how many tears fit into a coffee cup. This makes him impossibly adorable to millions of women.

new & improved actual paragraph:
Singer Chris Martin is hunky and sweet.  He's very much like that adorable artsy guy who sat in the corner of Café Claude all day.  You know, the one who wrote dreamy poetry about sunshine and willow trees.  And how many tears fit into a coffee cup. This makes him impossibly adorable to millions of women.

I think the second version is too choppy, I'd look for something more flowing, without the run-ons!  Just my two bits.
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« Reply #14 on: June 17, 2005, 10:53:50 PM »
Morford took a huge gamble early on in his writing career: He established a voice, and decided he would live or die by that voice.  That voice is largely defined by its looping, digressive nature, its run-ons perhaps as carefully chosen and edited as the more discrete sentences of Herb Caen.  Some love it, some hate it.  But Morford's gamble paid off insofar as the Chron decided that there are more people who love it than who hate it, and there are more in both camps than in the ambivalent camp.  I usually find it charming, but I can see why those who don't, don't.

And even if Morford actually lacked a grasp of grammar, there's no way the Chron copy editors would let errors and awkwardnesses like his slide without approval on a couple levels.  It's not like he's blogging to the site from home.  I can only imagine how many "CQ"s show up in his columns when the copy editors Scoop them (inside ref for copy editors).  What's there, for better or worse, is what's consciously intended to be there.
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